Kianna Dior’s Intense First-person Titty Fucking Experience

it was just wam bam thank you mamanonymous readerReport 2013-03-28 21:20:33This had so much potential to be a better story. Porn it was just wam bam thank you mamanonymous readerReport 2013-03-28 21:20:33This had so much potential to be a better story. it was just wam bam thank you mamanonymous readerReport 2013-03-28 21:20:33This had so much potential to be a better story. To start, the tab key exists for a reason. Also, proofread your stories. No offense. I’m not bagging on you, I’m just saying you’ve got a lot to work on. Build up the story a lot more, create foreplay, make details, etc. Next, never write something cliche like `Enough about me`, especially when you have barely written a paragraph about the character. She’s way too full of herself. …and ‘Cum on my PRETTY face? . . …I gave it a thumbs down. …anonymous readerReport 2013-03-29 04:19:37I liked the story, however, as a writer, there are some things I want to point out for you to improve upon.