A Desi Delight: The Art of Intimate Pleasure at Home

Keep trying, and use the spell checker and re-read your story to fix difficult spots.«1» Spell check probably won’t help because quite often the words are spelt correctly – they’re just the wrong word. It could be a great story. Porn Fucking Hopeless !!anonymous readerReport 2012-11-16 16:17:43Your Story seems to bounce around a lot. There are soooo many miss-spelled words that it takes twice or three times as long to read it as it should. Spell check probably won’t help because quite often the words are spelt correctly – they’re just the wrong word. Spell check probably won’t help because quite often the words are spelt correctly – they’re just the wrong word. Fucking Hopeless !!anonymous readerReport 2012-11-16 16:17:43Your Story seems to bounce around a lot. Fucking Hopeless !!anonymous readerReport 2012-11-16 16:17:43Your Story seems to bounce around a lot. I only comment about spelling and grammer, if it brings the story down. Keep trying, and use the spell checker and re-read your story to fix difficult spots.«1» 2 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2012-11-16