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6 comments«12»Anonymous readerReport 2015-12-22 17:13:09well written build up of tension between father and daughter. XXX Keep writing.anonymous readerReport 2012-06-27 20:38:53Great opener. Keep writing.anonymous readerReport 2012-06-27 20:38:53Great opener. Keep writing.anonymous readerReport 2012-06-27 20:38:53Great opener. Conflict in place, now bring it on home.anonymous readerReport 2012-06-27 20:38:40Great opener. 6 comments«12»Anonymous readerReport 2015-12-22 17:13:09well written build up of tension between father and daughter. 6 comments«12»Anonymous readerReport 2015-12-22 17:13:09well written build up of tension between father and daughter. Keep writing.anonymous readerReport 2012-06-27 20:38:53Great opener. Conflict in place, now bring it on home.anonymous readerReport 2012-05-07 12:45:05Like it so far next part please.«12» Conflict in place, now bring it on home.anonymous readerReport 2012-06-27 20:38:40Great opener. Conflict in place, now bring it on home.anonymous readerReport 2012-05-07 12:45:05Like it so far next part please.«12» Conflict in place, now bring it on home.anonymous readerReport 2012-05-07 12:45:05Like it so far next part please.«12» 6 comments«12»Anonymous readerReport 2015-12-22 17:13:09well written build up of tension between father and daughter. You should maintain the tension as the story develops.anonymous readerReport 2013-10-24 13:18:4987FJXj This is one awesome article. You should maintain the tension as the story