Amateur Freya’s Intimate Homemade Handjob

Instead of critisizing just read and move to the next story don’t bring a person down for having the guts to post here. XXX Instead of critisizing just read and move to the next story don’t bring a person down for having the guts to post here. The second thing that could be improved is detail. The second thing that could be improved is detail. Don’t be afraid of expounding more.zanonymous readerReport 2013-02-27 23:47:41So overall it has some good potential. Don’t be afraid to write and add paragraphs/grammar. For something like this, a little back-story could be a great help.anonymous readerReport 2013-02-27 23:33:55Not bad but add some more detail«1» Try separating the paragraphs out so that it is more readable. Don’t be afraid of expounding more.zanonymous readerReport 2013-02-27 23:47:41So overall it has some good potential. Instead of critisizing just read and move to the next story don’t bring a person down for having the guts to post here.