Anita Bhabhi’s steamy shower reveal, showing off her slender figure and untamed bush

You say his body is “gender confused”. We as readers can not see what you have in your head, so as a writer it is your job to make us see it by describing what you see. Eporner I understood that by the way you described Eric with the black spiky hair.anonymous readerReport 2012-08-04 17:21:52xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxanonymous readerReport 2012-08-04 17:21:51xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxanonymous readerReport 2012-04-27 00:30:52great story, please keep writing more«12» Also please go into a bit more detail about his passed, what made his family resent him so bad, and treat him the way they did. This is because there really is little to no description on the main character at all. You say his body is “gender confused”. I see him as a boy with fairly feminine features, maybe a girlish ass. I’m asking this because from what I’ve ready, it seems like the characters are gay, which doesn’t bother me, any, but I’d like to see you fill in the blankness of the characters in your story.