Ashley Adams’ Analytical Approach

Putting in more background, descriptions, and working on punctuation and the like really make a big difference. This story is really hot, as are your others, but your writing in this one is far better. Eporner This story is really hot, as are your others, but your writing in this one is far better. And it is going in my favourites list! It’s a quality story and very hot! This story is really hot, as are your others, but your writing in this one is far better. Putting in more background, descriptions, and working on punctuation and the like really make a big difference. And it is going in my favourites list! I notice you haven’t written a new story for a while. 4 comments«1»BadInAGoodWayReport 2011-08-27 01:43:45Mai I’ve come back to read this for a second time it was so good. This story is really hot, as are your others, but your writing in this one is far better. Putting in more background, descriptions, and working on punctuation