Black Friday Bargain: This Salesgirl’s Getting Pounded In The Stockroom

but need more paragraphs and a better ending! Eporner it is believable. …and well written… 10 comments«12»Anonymous readerReport 2008-09-07 18:31:00hahahaha okay, that was kinda freakylalaReport 2008-07-22 12:57:42oh gawd could u not be any worse??????!!!!!!!!READERReport 2007-09-04 13:48:58Your punctuation is godforsakenly atrocious to the point that it completely detracts from the rest of what is written here, however awful it may also be.READERReport 2007-08-25 17:20:37OKAYREADERReport 2007-08-14 18:28:41not bad, not good! but need more paragraphs and a better ending! but need more paragraphs and a better ending! it is believable. …and well written… it is believable. …and well written… it is believable. …and well written… it is believable. …and well written… dont leave it hanging. …7/10«12» it is believable. …and well written… but need more paragraphs and a better ending! 10 comments«12»Anonymous readerReport 2008-09-07 18:31:00hahahaha okay, that was kinda freakylalaReport 2008-07-22 12:57:42oh gawd could u not be any worse??????!!!!!!!!READERReport 2007-09-04 13:48:58Your punctuation is godforsakenly atrocious to the point that it completely detracts from the rest of what is written here, however awful it may also be.READERReport 2007-08-25 17:20:37OKAYREADERReport 2007-08-14 18:28:41not bad, not good!