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7 comments«12»anonymous readerReport 2012-06-17 01:11:29Very good I must say!anonymous readerReport 2012-06-13 08:48:10Did you ever hear of the six questions that a newspaper article should answer – who, what, where, when, how and why? Eporner How did they meet? and lastly, and I got this on my own story as a comment, read your own story out loud to catch some of the mistakes. When does this story take place? 7 comments«12»anonymous readerReport 2012-06-17 01:11:29Very good I must say!anonymous readerReport 2012-06-13 08:48:10Did you ever hear of the six questions that a newspaper article should answer – who, what, where, when, how and why? Who are the characters? When does this story take place? And why are they attracted to each other. Keep those in mind when writing a story too. 🙂 now… and lastly, and I got this on my own story as a comment, read your own story out loud to catch some of the mistakes.




