Getting Taken By A Crew Of Naughty Grannies

It had good detail, and a back story, and whatnot. Eporner Would have been awesome if the paladins got their asses kicked at the end. This story lacked something, and I can’t put my finger on it. 1 comments«1»ClyReport 2013-08-23 19:38:00It was OK. Would have been awesome if the paladins got their asses kicked at the end. Good job over all!«1» 1 comments«1»ClyReport 2013-08-23 19:38:00It was OK. The grammar and spelling were good enough, much better than most others on this site. Good job over all!«1» 1 comments«1»ClyReport 2013-08-23 19:38:00It was OK. This story lacked something, and I can’t put my finger on it. This story lacked something, and I can’t put my finger on it. Good job over all!«1» I just didn’t get sucked in. This story lacked something, and I can’t put my finger on it.