Hermana B se luce con un trasero grabado que deja sin aliento
WHERE ARE THE PARENTS? DO THE PARENTS FIND OUT? Porn DID THEY EVER FEEL ANYTHING FOR EACH OTHER BEFORE THIS? where is the background and character development? personality and character traits, how they interact in normal situations, etc. DO THEY KEEP FUCKING OR WAS IT A ONE TIME THING? DO THE PARENTS FIND OUT? WHERE ARE THE PARENTS? WHAT KIND OF RELATIONSHIP DID THEY HAVE BEFORE THIS? Me personally I give it 3 out of 5 and I look foward to see this progress.anonymous readerReport 2013-04-19 06:01:46A great story but needs to be longer. It stands good on its own but I’d like to see you edit it and add more. AS IS THIS WAS WAY TO SHORT AND WAY TO RUSHED AND NEEDS TO BE DELETED.anonymous readerReport 2013-07-15 21:15:41not good this reads like it should be chapter two not one. DO THEY KEEP FUCKING OR WAS IT A ONE TIME THING? WHERE ARE THE PARENTS?




