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Very long diatribes bore most people shitless, and bored people can be less than complimentary in their assessments of your writing style. It’s also odd how you forget apostrophes for words like her’s. Indian porn Yours Truly. J.A.G«1» Keep writing.Ghostrider939Report 2012-09-30 21:21:41Main problem, Hank, is HUGE sentences. Yours Truly. From what I read I would give it a 7.6 out of 10. If it’s only a fantasy story, make yourself taller, change the daughter’s name to Mindy or Wendy, explain what is wrong with your son (ie Bi-polar or ??)
Not a BAD story – just needs some improvement.anonymous readerReport 2012-08-11 02:18:40For the most part it’s a decent story from what I read but could be better. Yours Truly. Very long diatribes bore most people shitless, and bored people can be less than complimentary in their assessments of your writing style. And when you brought up Mendy’s new boyfriend who stole everything from her, I had to re-read it to get the wording correct.