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post corrections. It seems more a first draft than a piece of poetry…READERReport 2004-06-13 23:24:09Your attempt is admirable, but i agree with Jack. Eporner Post corrections.«1» Either make it graphic or alluditory, but not a little bit of both.READERReport 2004-06-08 23:54:04Spelling errors in poetry is suicidal. Either make it graphic or alluditory, but not a little bit of both.READERReport 2004-06-08 23:54:04Spelling errors in poetry is suicidal. Either make it graphic or alluditory, but not a little bit of both.READERReport 2004-06-08 23:54:04Spelling errors in poetry is suicidal. Either make it graphic or alluditory, but not a little bit of both.READERReport 2004-06-08 23:54:04Spelling errors in poetry is suicidal. Use more euphonisms or none at all. post corrections. Use more euphonisms or none at all. Post corrections.«1» Either make it graphic or alluditory, but not a little bit of both.READERReport 2004-06-08 23:54:04Spelling errors in poetry is suicidal. Post corrections.«1» Use more euphonisms or none at all.