Mature Swingers Exchange Partners And Enjoy Passionate Encounters – Sweet Sinner

28 comments«12345»wantingnotReport 2019-11-03 23:10:58Th concept is quite good but it is presented poorly. The storyline is opressively trite and it’s filled with minucia.Anonymous readerReport 2014-08-24 23:52:18The basic story is good, but you really need to work on your spelling and grammar. Eporner Try reading some Steven King for pace.Anonymous readerReport 2016-08-04 20:32:44I gave you a negative rating because she had a shaved pussy. We don’t want the 8-year-old look.Anonymous readerReport 2015-01-02 05:58:51This is the most infantile story I’ve ever tried to read. 28 comments«12345»wantingnotReport 2019-11-03 23:10:58Th concept is quite good but it is presented poorly. You keep using Your instead of You’re, cars don’t have breaks unless they’re broken, they have brakes, start each sentence with a capital, use punctuation for goodness sake! 28 comments«12345»wantingnotReport 2019-11-03 23:10:58Th concept is quite good but it is presented poorly. It had a lot of potential but poor grammar and inarticulation made it boring and difficult to read. It had a lot of potential but poor grammar and inarticulation made it boring and difficult to read.