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0 You did a great job of writing. XXX I had more problems reading some of the comments that some people have made here about your story, then I did reading your story.gymgirlReport 2012-10-29 17:54:55Haha great story! I was enjoying the story so much it made me sad to reach that point. Nice storyAnonymous readerReport 2012-10-31 00:09:37Hello Stranger92 (This is the second part to my comment)
You did a great job of dividing your story into correct paragraphs, which makes it a lot easier to read. HopefullAuthorHopefullAuthorReport 2012-10-30 23:58:13Hello Stranger92
I just finished reading your story, and I want to say that I loved it. The characters seemed realistic and almost true to life. I don’t agree with other comments, your language is fine.«1234» I have read other stories here, written by people that was supposed to know the English language, and some of them were worse and harder to read than yours.