Stunning Brunette Takes It Hard From Behind

Again, I’m not trying to be a Bitch in any way, I’m just critiquing your work to try to make you a better writer.AnnistaysiaReport 2014-12-17 06:37:22So, this is the third in the series. XXX You say his body is “gender confused”. However, I can’t stress this enough, character description is the difference between your “transgendered” boy or your “scrawny, frail” submissive boy. Also please go into a bit more detail about his passed, what made his family resent him so bad, and treat him the way they did. I have a decent idea what that means, but how does that play into the story? The majority of us know what a basic house and school layout is like, so there you’re fine. 8 comments«12»AnnistaysiaReport 2014-12-17 06:53:55I reread my previous comment and decided to post another to elaborate on something’s a little further.