Sweat And Seduction: Riley Reid’s Intense Workout Session

You clearly have a talent for writing; keep with it. Eporner My bad. My own experience is that I don’t fall in love until the third time with sex.dwduckReport 2009-11-21 10:52:43Thank you. That’s why we’re here.«12345» There is little that alienates readers more than hubris. Constructive criticism: try double-spacing between paragraphs and lines of dialogue. That’s why we’re here.«12345» The comment was snarky, and was trying to act like it was a constructive, when it wasn’t. Frankly, I didn’t read your story all that closely, chiefly due to the god-awful spacing – it’s hard to read a wall-o-text. You clearly have a talent for writing; keep with it. Still, the commenter you were blasting, dwduck, made some valid points – and you addressed them. That’s why we’re here.«12345» I re-read the story, and did find where the jock thinks to himself that he’s falling for this girl. That’s why we’re here.«12345» I apologize for shooting my keyboard off without knowing what I was typing about.