Tryst Among the Straw

bit impposible, but its fanasy right? Eporner But I still give you a positive vote.anonymous readerReport 2012-01-18 13:12:55Ever here of a thing called separation of paragraphs? bit impposible, but its fanasy right? bit impposible, but its fanasy right? However the story was just a bit weak. …I have to agree with the first poster. . … But I still give you a positive vote.anonymous readerReport 2012-01-18 13:12:55Ever here of a thing called separation of paragraphs? bit impposible, but its fanasy right? Spelling? bit impposible, but its fanasy right? Spelling? Spelling? Work on all three and your story tellin will be better.anonymous readerReport 2012-01-18 08:26:21just shut up and let em fuck«12» Spelling? bit impposible, but its fanasy right? But I still give you a positive vote.anonymous readerReport 2012-01-18 13:12:55Ever here of a thing called separation of paragraphs? Spelling? Just maybe a bit longer.anonymous readerReport 2012-01-18 14:15:46The paragraphs were OK, the spelling was way above average for this site, and the grammar was OK too.