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3 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2013-01-23 15:13:26very poorly written it sounds like english is NOT your native language. best thing you can do is delete and rewrite it using a GOOD EDITOR before reposting and NEVER POST A STORY WITHOUT GOING THROUGH A GOOD EDITOR FIRST.Anonymous readerReport 2010-03-22 15:27:33Good story.Anonymous readerReport 2010-03-22 13:17:43Fair enough that I gave it a positive. XXX . …but…barely. …«1» best thing you can do is delete and rewrite it using a GOOD EDITOR before reposting and NEVER POST A STORY WITHOUT GOING THROUGH A GOOD EDITOR FIRST.Anonymous readerReport 2010-03-22 15:27:33Good story.Anonymous readerReport 2010-03-22 13:17:43Fair enough that I gave it a positive. . …but…barely. …«1» best thing you can do is delete and rewrite it using a GOOD EDITOR before reposting and NEVER POST A STORY WITHOUT GOING THROUGH A GOOD EDITOR FIRST.Anonymous readerReport 2010-03-22 15:27:33Good story.Anonymous readerReport 2010-03-22 13:17:43Fair enough that I gave it a positive. . …but…barely. …«1» 3 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2013-01-23 15:13:26very poorly written it sounds like english is NOT your native language.